Tuesday, March 17, 2026

SIMPLE SENTENCES AREN'T SO SIMPLE

From Happy Songkran Day  - Used with permission by the author/illustrator

This month, I've been discussing Dow Phumiruk's picture book, Happy Songkran Day! The Thai New Year Celebration, to explore how students of all ages can use the story to celebrate the Thai New Year from April 13-15. This week, I'm using one of the illustrations from the book, graciously provided by Dow, to show how picture books can be used to teach both simple and compound sentence structure.

If you've read my Story Frames PLOT ANALYSIS of this story, you will know that this illustration depicts the moment when Tida and her mother are washing the stain out of Tek's new sash, which Tek plans to wear at the dance celebration that evening. Tida accidentally spilled peanut sauce on her sister's sash and was afraid she had ruined it. Read the book with students first to provide the context. For students both young and old, check out the compound sentences activity that follows. 

"I think about the water washing away my mistakes, and my breathing slows."

The sentence from the text above is considered compound because it consists of two simple sentences (independent clauses) combined with the coordinating conjunction "and."  

An independent clause can stand alone as a sentence. It contains a subject and a predicate (verb). See below how the two parts of the sentence could each be a sentence on their own. 

I think about the water washing away my mistakes.

My breathing slows.

Complex Sentences

While the example from the text is a compound sentence (Two independent clauses joined by the coordinating conjunction and), the example below is a complex sentence. 

Example: Tida washed the sash because it was dirty.

A complex sentence contains an independent clause (Tida washed the sash) and a dependent clause (because it was dirty). The second part is dependent because it depends on the first part to make sense. A dependent clause is introduced by a word like because, although, so (that).

The diagrams below from The Raven Remix Activity Book illustrate the difference. Sign up HERE to get these two PDF graphics for FREE in my March 27, 2026 Newsletter. 




Note: The Raven Remix Activity Book: 50+ Activities and Games for Decoding, Reading Comprehension, Writing, and Speech includes 15 different activities to work on sentence structure.  

Compound Sentence Activity

The illustration and sentence example above from Happy Songkran Day can be used to introduce the process of creating compound sentences. 

Both parts of the sentence in the example could stand on their own. This is what makes them independent clauses. When independent clauses are combined with a coordinating conjunction, one of the FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, (and) so), they create a compound sentence. 

Teaching sentence combining is one of the best ways to improve reading comprehension. It is often at the sentence level where comprehension falls apart, even for older students. Picture book illustrations provide an excellent opportunity to work on this concept, especially with struggling readers. The class can orally create two simple sentences based on the illustration and then use one of the FANBOYS to combine them. Consider how the sentences below, inspired by the illustration, could be combined. Which of the FANBOYS would you use? Which examples create compound sentences? Hint: Both parts of a compound sentence must have a subject and a predicate (verb).

Sentences:        Tida spilled peanut sauce on her sister's special sash.

                            Tida washed out the stain.

Combined A:  Tida spilled peanut sauce on her sister's special sash, but she washed out the stain.

Combined B:  Tida spilled peanut sauce on her sister's special sash but washed out the stain.

 A is a compound sentence because both parts contain a subject and a predicate. There is a comma separating the two independent clauses. B is still a simple sentence because the subject, she, has been removed. 

Deeper Dive for Older Students - Or Stop Here if it's TMI

But wait! Isn't breathing a verb? What about washing

Although washing could be considered a verb, in this context, it is part of the noun phrase, "the water washing away my mistakes." 

A noun phrase is defined as a group of words that functions like a noun, including any words that describe the head noun, such as adjectives. A noun or noun phrase may be replaced by a pronoun (it, he, she, they, you, etc) without changing the meaning of the sentence.

Washing helps to describe which water we are talking about. It's not the sewer water, the ocean water, or even the water in my glass. It's "the water washing away my mistakes." How do we know this is a noun phrase and not an independent clause? The whole phrase could be replaced by the pronoun "it." 

I think about it.

Also, note that the phrase "the water washing away my mistakes" is NOT an independent clause because it cannot stand alone as a sentence.

Those Tricky Verbs

In my book, Story Frames for Teaching Literacy, the late William Van Cleave wrote an excellent chapter on "Function Trumps Form: Sentence Level Instruction." He discusses how, rather than categorizing specific words into parts of speech, we need to look at the function of the word in a sentence. 

For the example of washing, observe how the word can represent different parts of speech:

1) Tida is washing out the stain. (verb - present participle with the helping verb is)

2) Bob put the pants in the washing machine. (adjective - to describe the type of machine)

3) Washing is hard work. (noun - gerund) 

The Never-Ending Sentence Game

Note that a simple sentence can be quite long. The example in Combined B above contains the verb phrase "washed out the stain." Without the subject, it is just a phrase. With the subject, it would be a clause: "She washed out the stain.

This sentence also contains the prepositional phrase "on her sister's special sash." A simple sentence may contain any number of phrases (noun, prepositional, verbal) as long as it only has one independent clause (subject + predicate combination). 

For fun, use the illustration above and add as many prepositional phrases as possible to create a ridiculously long sentence.

Example: Tida washed the sash with the water in the bucket on the grass next to her mother in the backyard during the Thai New Year in April...

Complex Sentences

In my next blog post, I will share a truly "simple" activity for creating complex sentences. But wait! Can a complex sentence writing activity actually be less complex than our exploration of simple sentences above? Yes, and I will show you how. 

Remember the complex sentence - Tida washed the sash because it was dirty.

Compare that sentence to our never-ending sentence above, and stay tuned for my next activity.

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Saturday, March 14, 2026

A STORY FRAMES ANALYSIS OF HAPPY SONGKRAN DAY

 

In last week's BLOG, I recommended using Dow Phumiruk's picture book, Happy Songkran Day! The Thai New Year Celebration to celebrate culture and diversity. It may be used for all ages to explore the Thai New Year celebrated from April 13-15. Read last week's blog post to learn more about how to use the book in the classroom. This week, I'll give a brief summary of the book using Storyboard elements from my book, Story Frames for Teaching Literacy. For more information about Story Frames, go HERE or visit Brookes Publishing.

BEGINNING:
1. Ordinary World - Tida is a sweet young girl who lives with her parents and her sister, Lek. She gets a little clumsy when she is excited.
2. Call and Response - Tida wakes up her sister, Lek, on April 13, to celebrate the beginning of the Thai New Year. 
3. Mentors, Guides, and Gifts - Tida's mother teaches her the true meaning of the Thai cleaning rituals as the story progresses.
4. Crossing - The family cleans their hands in jasmine water to wash away the sins of the old year in preparation for the new one. 
MIDDLE:
5. New World - They go to the temple to pour water on the Buddha statue.
6. Problems, Prizes, and Plans - The family prepares special foods like satay with peanut sauce for the celebration. The prize is the big dance that evening, where Lek will perform with other children. Tida makes a lot of mistakes while cooking because she gets excited and rushes through things. 
7. Midpoint Attempt - Tek returns from dance rehearsal and shows the family her special dress made for the occasion. Tida wants to show off her work and accidentally spills peanut sauce on Tek's sash. 
8. Chase and Escape - Tida runs to her room in shame.
END:
9. Downtime - Her mother sits with Tida and explains that everyone makes mistakes. The point of the cleansing celebration is to wash away mistakes and start each year anew.
10. Death and Transformation - Tida and her mother wash the sash and make it good as new.
11. Climax: The Final Test - Tida apologizes to Tek for having so many accidents. Her sister tells her that the New Year is a time for forgiveness.
12. Final Reward - Family and friends celebrate the new year with water balloons, squirt guns, and buckets of water, all symbols of cleansing. Tek's dance performance is a great success, and at a big dinner that night, Tida is proud that she does not spill anything.

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Tuesday, March 10, 2026

CELEBRATING DIVERSITY AND THAI CULTURE WITH HAPPY SONGKRAN DAY

Get ready for the Thai New Year April, 13-15, by checking out this delightful picture book -  Happy Songkran Day! The Thai New Year Celebration, written and illustrated by Dow Phumiruk. It's available at Amazon or Bookshop.org (Where proceeds go to the bookstore of your choice).

One of the most enjoyable ways to introduce students to other cultures is to showcase their celebrations. This story explores the themes of forgiveness and washing away "sins" to start the new year, which are central to the Thai celebration. Rather than the heavy-handed notion of wrongdoing, the message is that we all make mistakes (both big and small) and have the chance to start over. The symbolism is conveyed through squirt guns, water balloons, and children pouring buckets of water on each other, reminding us not to take our blunders so seriously.

If you happen to be sharing this story in a location where it's still snowing in April, you might explore how your climate differs from Thailand's and how geography shapes culture.

Children's books often provide a quick and engaging way to share ideas, regardless of your students' ages. Happy Songkran Day is for ages 3-5, but the ensuing conversations can be adapted for any level. In addition, the author provides a list of resources, including children's books for older students, that may be used for comparison and further knowledge.

In my book, Story Frames for Teaching Literacy, Chapter 7 explores "From Story Writing to Expository Writing: Bridging the Gap With Narrative Nonfiction." Although Dow's book is a work of fiction, it explores a real-life celebration and includes many nonfiction elements that teachers can use to bridge the gap. There is a glossary, a list of resources for learning more about Thailand and Songkran, and an Author's Note with additional information. I had no idea the Thai calendar was 543 years ahead of the Gregorian Calendar. This April 13, 2026, Thailand is celebrating the year 2569.

Picture books also provide engaging ways to teach sentence structure, which I will discuss next week using an illustration from Happy Songkran Day.

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A Story Frames Analysis of Happy Songkran Day

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Friday, February 27, 2026

STORY FRAMES AND A RACE AROUND THE WORLD


This month, I'm featuring A Race Around the World: The True Story of Nellie Bly and Elizabeth Bisland. My Story Frames analysis is slightly modified and shortened here. This nonfiction narrative picture book on a topic relevant to all ages is written by Caroline Starr Rose and illustrated by Alexandra Bye, from the She Made History series. 

With spring break approaching, many students and teachers will be traveling. A Race Around the World is a relevant topic to explore. It follows the most unusual true journey of two female journalists in 1889, who race around the world to beat each other and the record set by the fictional character Phileas Fogg in Around the World in Eighty Days by Jules Verne. For students who aren't traveling, encourage taking a journey through a good book. Discuss how stories let us visit places we may never visit in real life. That way, when you come back together after break, everyone has a story to share.

This story analysis is not meant to replace reading the book, but to enhance the discussion with students. Read more about Story Frames and my story analysis system HERE.

1. Ordinary World: Nellie Bly is a reporter for a local newspaper, the World, while Elizabeth Bisland writes a monthly column for Cosmopolitan magazine. 

2. Call and Response: Nellie Bly plans to travel the world in 75 days and beat the fictional Phileas Fogg record. Elizabeth's editor tells her he wants her to make the same journey around the world, but traveling in the opposite direction.

3. Mentors, Guides, and Gifts: Her boss advises Nellie that too much luggage will slow her down. She has a special dress made that she can wear for the entire journey.

4. Crossing (The Journey Begins): Nellie heads east, leaving New Jersey for England on an ocean steamer. At Grand Central Station, Elizabeth catches a westbound train, travels across the U.S., and then boards a ship heading to Japan.

5. New World: Both women visit many new and unusual places.

6. Problems, Prizes, and Plans: The Prize for both women is to win the race. Many obstacles and Problems arise to slow them down.

7. Midpoint Attempt: Nellie goes to meet the author, Jules Verne, then rushes to Italy, where she almost misses her next ship.

8. Downtime Response: Nellie arrives in Ceylon and relaxes on the beach. Elizabeth arrives in Japan and has such a good time that she plans to return.

9. Chase and Escape: Their two ships cross paths on the South China Sea as they continue their race.

10. Death and Transformation (All Hope is Lost): In France, Elizabeth misses her boat back to America. In San Francisco, Nellie's train is cancelled because of snow. Things look hopeless, and both women must make a new plan.

11. Climax: The Final Test: Nellie takes a train south through Arizona, where people cheer her on at every station. Meanwhile, after missing two more ships, Elizabeth must take a train to catch the last ship to America.

12. Final Reward: Nellie wins the race, completing the trip in 72 days. Although Elizabeth loses the race, she continues to travel for the rest of her life.

The complete story analysis for this book, along with analyses of 21 additional picture books and 10 chapter books and novels, is available on the download hub at the publisher's websit for purchasers of Story Frames.



A fun connection to this story is my free Story Ad Lib entitled Travel Trouble. The PDF may be downloaded as a link in my 2026 newsletter. Sign up HERE.

In 2021, I combined my love of writing with my experiences working with struggling readers and writers to create Story Frames: Enhancing Student Learning Through the Power of Storytelling. It is a twelve-step story analysis I created that is inspired by The Writers Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers by Christopher Vogler and various other books on story plotting for professional writers. Read more about it HERE.  

Sunday, February 8, 2026

THE SECRET LANGUAGE OF STORIES


I have given several presentations and workshops over the years on "The Secret Language of Stories," exploring the plotting secrets of professional writers. In addition to working in the public schools as a speech-language pathologist and as a private dyslexia therapist, I have published three young adult novels. (Find out more about my novels HERE.)

In 2021, I combined my love of writing with my experiences working with struggling readers and writers to create Story Frames: Enhancing Student Learning Through the Power of Storytelling. It is a twelve-step story analysis I created that is inspired by The Writers Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers by Christopher Vogler and various other books on story plotting for professional writers (See my blog post about How Screenwriting and Novel Writing Strategies Influenced Story Frames). I use the Story Frames method to create my novels and teach writing to kids of all ages and adults. I teach students storyboarding and a strategy called Pictography to capture important plot points through quick sketches. 

My method is broken down into twelve basic elements or Story Frames. Stories don’t necessarily contain all of the components, and they don’t always occur in the order given here. In longer stories, many of the elements are repeated. The twelve basic elements for the COMPLETE Storyboard are below:

BEGINNING:
1. Ordinary World
2. Call and Response
3. Mentors, Guides, and Gifts
4. Crossing
MIDDLE:
5. New World
6. Problems, Prizes, and Plans
7. Midpoint Attempt
8. Downtime
END:
9. Chase and Escape
10. Death and Transformation
11. Climax: The Final Test
12. Final Reward

For younger students or when analyzing simpler stories, I use a BASIC storyboard containing eight elements:

1. Ordinary World
2. Call and Response
3. Problem and Prize
4. Plan
5. Attempt 1
6. Attempt 2
7. Climax - The Final Test
8. Reward

This year, my blog posts will focus on sharing a variety of children's books that I have analyzed using this structure.  I'm always looking for ways to make the writing process fun and engaging. Chapter 6 of my Story Frames book focuses on "From Speaking to Writing: Sentences, Paragraphs, and Stories." One of the many downloadable resources from that chapter is a Story Ad Lib. It's a fun, fill-in-the-blank story writing activity similar to commercial Mad Lib games. My version gives students a fun way to practice working with narrative structure. This year, I will be giving away several PDF activities in my monthly newsletter based on Story Ad Libs. The first will come out on February 27, 2026. Sign up HERE if you would like to receive my newsletter and receive those free PDFs.
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Thursday, January 1, 2026

Twelve Writing Prompts to Start the New Year Right - One for Every Month

Start the new year right with Twelve Different Writing Prompts - One for Every Month by revisiting my 2024 Year of AWE - Authentic Writing Experiences below. 


January - Explore how to turn thank-you notes into a powerful literacy experience. Find highlights in my January 2024 Blog.

February - An Acrostic Valentine Activity inspired by Edgar Allan Poe is available on my February Blog.

March - Get ideas for using food and recipe writing to celebrate culture. Students learn how to write step-by-step directions for a practical and fun purpose. Find highlights HERE.

April - Download the FREE poetry writing PDF Activity called Pandora's Lunch Box. Inspired by my decodable book, Gods and Gifts: Three Greek Myths Retold. Learn how to write List Poems HERE.

May - Explore using summer vacation themes to research topics and create information posters HERE.

June - Create a Nature Journal and encourage students write down their observations about the natural world HERE

July - Stimulate the imagination of young people by exploring inventions at your local fair. If you don't have the opportunity to go to a real fair, read the book, Mr. Ferris and His Wheel. Read more HERE.

August - Read a book and write a letter to the author. Discover tips for connecting with authors and for writing multi-paragraph letters HERE.

September - Plan a day at the museum and discover tips for using photographs and captions to summarize the experience HERE.

October - Based on my book, The Raven Remix: A Mashup of Poe Titles, this month's Authentic Writing Experience is about Scary Stories. Find it HERE.

November - In addition to being a famous poet and short story writer, Poe was also a magazine editor and literary critic. Visit my BLOG for details about Poe's other career and to discover tips for helping students write book reviews.

December - Learn how to write song spoofs HERE by enjoying this Edgar Allan Poe-inspired rendition of "Jingle Bells."

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Saturday, December 6, 2025

ONLINE MASTER'S DEGREE IN SPECIAL EDUCATION WITH A DYSLEXIA CREDENTIAL

If you have a bachelor's degree in education, are currently a state-certified teacher, and are interested in pursuing a Master's Degree (M.Ed.) with a built-in Level 1 Dyslexia credential, I highly recommend the program offered by Providence College in Rhode Island. You can complete the program in person or online. If you would like more information, contact the program director, Marcy Zipke, before December 31, 2025, at mzipke@providence.edu or the graduate admissions office at gradschool@providence.edu. You may also reference the QR code below.


I teach an online course as an adjunct instructor in this program each fall, entitled Language-Based Learning: Vocabulary, Comprehension, and Written Language. As someone who has specialized in the field of dyslexia as both a certified speech-language pathologist (SLP) and a certified academic language therapist (CALT), I highly recommend the program offered at Providence College.


Please forward this information to anyone who might be interested. Reach out to Marcy Zipke before the end of the year at mzipke@providence.edu.  Also, visit the QR code above or go to  https://graduate.providence.edu/master-of-education-in-special-education-with-dyslexia-credential/